Love Song VII: Eyes
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how
youreyes
your
suneyes
stirred
my blood
that last time
that last moment
stirred something
hungry
parched
somethingdeep
youreyes
that last moment
how
they
seared
into
my brain
my
soul
branding
you
into
the
hidden corners
of me
now
open
like a flower
to
your light
to
your sun
youreyes
forever amber
taking me
branding
me
into the marrow
of
your
bones
aching now
with cold
at
my
leaving you
youreyes
that last moment
so full
with
the what
the when
overflowing
with
the
how
of
me
and you
youreyes sunbrown
myeyes earthbrown
taking
the measure
saying
the measure
shining
with rivers of goodbye
that last time
eyes
that last moment
telling.
2/23/08
13 comments:
Hey, Frankie, I'm finally visiting your blog. I love the poems, especially the images and format. I notice that they are already copyrighted. Does this mean that you have published them already somewhere else? Or will they be coming out soon? Did you know that Marcos wrote Kathy B. a letter of rec to get funding to attend a poetry workshop over the summer. She writes sonnets. I'll keep visiting.
I really like this poem a lot.I love reading poetry and this is why it caught my attention. The poem is really good and vivid. The way how you express yourself is really fascinating.The expression of feelings are really good and clear.
I enjoyed the poem it was wonderful. I loved the description in your poem it was inspiring.
The poem was beautiful, and I honestly feel you can tell a lot about a person when you look deep into their eyes.
When I read this poem I was able to envision the situation. The author expresses her feellings iin a clear and concise manner. I really enjoy reading different styles of poems because it gives me an idea how to write my own poems.
When I read this poem, "Love Song7: Eyes" I was able to envision the situation. The author expresses her feellings in a clear and concise manner. I admire the author becasue she expresses her self through writing in a strong way. I also like how the author is very genuine with her poems.
This blog was my favorite form 2008. Although the words used were so small, it seems that they are the words with so much meaning. I find it so interesting how we can all tell so much simply from looking into someones eyes. We can see the lies and the truths and the pain all behind someones eyes. Now I know I am not the only person that looks for something when I lookinto someones eyes.
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I especially like the format of the poem. I never saw a format like the ones you write and I think that they are really unique.
I enjoyed reading this poem a lot due to that fact that i also do my own poetry. I am also passionate about writing a lot of love poems. This poem in particular affected me because it had me intrigued. The author has a lot of emotion and knows how to show it through her writing of this poem.
I enjoyed reading this poem a lot due to that fact that i also do my own poetry. I am also passionate about writing a lot of love poems. This poem in particular affected me because it had me intrigued. The author has a lot of emotion and knows how to show it through her writing of this poem.
I really enjoyed this poem. Its beautiful and I think Frankie did a great job describing things the way she did. Even though it was short it still said a lot and i enjoyed that a lot. This is one of my favorite blogs the author posted !
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