Tuesday, August 28, 2007

Love Song I: Lyric 2 (To Stacey)

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Lyric 2
(To Stacey)


play goodbye
frankie

drop
a coin or two in the box
and

say
goodbye

play it now
frankie

listen
to
the
blues
the muse
the song
that
tells you
why

you
have to

say
play
goodbye

no
you never
wanted
to say it
but

play it
now

while evening dusk
fades
into
night
so lonely so blue


play it
now

while she haunts
the heart
the soul
of
you

play your last
frankie

the die is cast
frankie

go on
say

your
last goodbye

and soon

god please
make it soon

soon

you won’t
remember

soon

you won’t
forget

soon

you won’t
hear
the sounds
of
her
spinning
round in your head
the sounds of her
spinning
round


go on
drop a coin
frankie

then
you can
forget

the lyric

yes
drop a coin
so you can
forget

the melody

drop a coin
so you won’t
forget

the song of her

say it
say
goodbye

because
you will never
ever
play it

because
you could never
ever
say

never
tell her

goodbye.


8/28/07

6 comments:

Jay Jones said...
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Hazel Cueto said...

I thought that this poem "Love Song 1: Lyric 2(To Stacey)" is a great poem. I liked how she described how it was hard to say goodbye. Saying goodbye to a person is never easy. What I understood from this poem is that Stacey was a girl that the narrator really liked and somehow they broke up and for Frankie it was hard to say goodbye. Stacey was a person that meant a lot to the narrator.

Jay Jones said...

"Love Song 1: Lyric 2 (To Stacey)" is a great poem. I love the poem but I am confused about the beginning... I liked how she described how it was hard to say goodbye. Overall, great poem, just tell more like examples.

Monica said...

What I enjoyed about the poem "Love Song 1: Lyric 2 (to Stacey)" is that the words are very visual and descriptive. When Frankie Lennon says, "drop a coin or two in the box" I can imagine her literally dropping a coin into a jukebox and playing a melody in which she says her goodbyes. Saying goodbye is something that I do not like to do, especially if that person is a very intimate friend of mine. In the case of Frankie, she did not want to say goodbye to her loved one Stacey because she was really important to her. It was difficult for her to say goodbye and that attracted me into keep reading what was going to happen in the end.

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